Friday, October 13, 2006

FALLING FOR LIFE

I took a step forward
Only to find myself falling

Falling free from these shackles
To be prepared for the battles
Those which I have to face
& still those I will embrace

Had the wind in my face
Pulling my cheeks away
With the ground coming to me
& trees, getting better to see
I didn’t spread my wings
I just let it be
I flew into the sunlight
Or in to the moonlight
That I had to decide
With no one to adjudge

Falling free from these shackles
To be prepared for the battles
Those which I have to face
& still those I will embrace


I have the wind to support me
Sunlight feeding me energy
Trees always to accommodate
& the skies to listen & appreciate
All I wanted was to break free


I flew far & wide, only to realise
Just how real, staying on land can be

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Nice effort.Keep it up(Buck it up:)))

Aazar said...

to be really honest...i dont think this poem did justice to the theme..u cud have related falling with sooo many other things than just..falling...i know u cud have written this in a much better way...but anyway, dont be disheartened man, this aint a bad poem...!!